Sunday, September 30, 2007

My 2nd Story Attempt

Rachel walked in the door slowly. She knew that Tom wouldnt be home for a few days. She hated when he had to go out of town on business. She came in and saw a piece of paper on the table but ignored it thinking she had left it there. After putting the groceries away she picked up the paper. All it said was "GO TO OUR ROOM". She ran upstairs as fast as she could hoping that Tom would be there. Instead there was another note. She picked it up and read it "TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES AND LIE ON THE BED AND WAIT".

She quickly stripped of her clothes and jumped into bed. It seemed like she was waiting forever. She felt a hand touch her and she jumped. He held her down but didnt say a word. He started massaging her back and slowly moved down to her bottom. She knew his smell and his touch oh so well. She loved her husband so much, and was so thankful he had come back early.

Rachel sat up to give Tom a kiss, but when she saw his face she got butterflies in her stomach. She recognized that look and she knew she was in big trouble.

"Tom, whats wrong?"

"Rachel, how many times do I have to tell you to lock the doors when you leave?"

Rachel started thinking fast. Did she leave the door unlocked? She only ran out for a few groceries. She couldnt remember if she locked it or not.

"Tom, I am so sorry. I just went out to grab some groceries. I was only gone about an hour. I was in a hurry because it was raining and I guess I just forgot."

Tom didnt say anything he just sat there for a moment trying to calm himself down. He slowly stood up and walked over to the dresser and picked up the hair brush.

"Tom, I am so sorry! Please not the brush."

He quietly walked back over and picked up his wife and placed her over his lap. He started to spank her with his hand. He had missed her oh so much. It scared him to death when he came home and found the door unlocked and her cell phone right there on the table. He spanked her bottom with his hand till it was a deep shade of pink. Rachel started crying almost immediately, not because it hurt too badly but because she had once again let Tom down.

Tom picked up the hair brush and set it on Rachel's bottom.

"Rachel, when I came home and found the door unlocked and your cell phone on the table, I thought something very bad had happened to you. I can not bear to think about losing you. I love you so much darling. This spanking is to help you remember that I love you and want you to stay safe."

Rachel just laid across her lovers lap sobbing quietly. She couldnt believe how stupid she could be at times. Tom picked up the hair brush and brought it down hard across her left cheek. She jumped at the stinging pain it brought.

Smack, smack, smack, smack, smack

"Im sorry Tom, I will lock the door from now on."

Smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack

Tom was really spanking her hard and fast. It was all Rachel could do to stay in position.

Smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack, smack

Tom dropped the brush on the bed and just sat there rubbing her back. As soon as she regained her composure she sat up on his lap and threw her arms around him. She had missed him so much over the last month. Tom held her there for a few minutes then turned and laid her gently on the bed.

He quickly shed his clothes and climbed on top of her. He couldnt wait to be inside her again. It had been way too long. They fucked and fucked until they both fell asleep from exhaustion.




Feel free to leave any comments that can help me become a better story writer! I would greatly appreciate it.

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